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i was out walking last night before i went to bed and i was on that same road and i dont know how i could have completely forgotten about this story, but one of the reasons the deer leg incident is even more bizzarre.. is because ive already HAD an encounter with a deer leg. O___o years ago, and i hadn't even thought about it. but yes, here it is. o.O

[The Original]
DEER LEG STORY

A Prequel.

It was in grade nine, in the spring; I believe it was spring break.  KT, Sam (the other ginger), KT’s little sister and I had walked to a nearby ice cream shop, and were on our way back to KT’s house on a road surrounded by forests.  Because of the forests, deer are a very common sight and often linger in the trees near the ditch.
One of us then noticed something: a deer leg.  In the ditch with no deer in sight, lay a furry, bloody limb.
Being the squeamish type, I immediately freaked out at the sight of it.  The others did not, not even KT’s little sister who would only have been eight years old at the time. 
So of course, they all thought it was hilarious that I would scream about it.  Which, naturally, led to the following months being filled with KT, Sam, KT’s little sister, and pretty much any and everyone else who found it funny, repeatedly yelling ‘DEER LEG!’ and then mocking my reaction.

POSITIVELY HILARIOUS.

_______<

cool story bro.

cept not, also you need to learn how to write lol

lol. i knwo how to write !! thats fine writing =P

[quote author=Kar'Rina link=topic=3185.msg39530#msg39530 date=1281215804]
It was in grade nine, in the spring; I believe it was spring break. (passive voice)

Because of the forests, deer are a very common sight and often linger in the trees near the ditch. (Awkward)

One of us then noticed something: a deer leg.  (Wordy)

Being the squeamish type, I immediately freaked out at the sight of it. (Passive Voice)

The others did not, not even KT’s little sister who would only have been eight years old at the time.  (wut, awkward,passive voice)

So of course, they all thought it was hilarious that I would scream about it.  (also awkward, wordy, etc)
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[quote author=Kar'Rina link=topic=3185.msg39535#msg39535 date=1281223397]
lol. i knwo how to write !! thats fine writing =P

I rest my case, knowing how to write and writing well are two different things.

lmao well it was supposed to be passive voice, it was in the past. o.O

[quote author=Kar'Rina link=topic=3185.msg39540#msg39540 date=1281224309]
lmao well it was supposed to be passive voice, it was in the past. o.O
[/quote]

..thats past tenseerrya know just..

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lmao ooh a new goddamnit kar pic?? oh dear. T_T

[quote author=Kar'Rina link=topic=3185.msg39530#msg39530 date=1281215804]
i was out walking last night before i went to bed and i was on that same road and i dont know how i could have completely forgotten about this story, but one of the reasons the deer leg incident is even more bizzarre.. is because ive already HAD an encounter with a deer leg. O___o years ago, and i hadn't even thought about it. but yes, here it is. o.O

[The Original]
DEER LEG STORY

A Prequel.

It was in grade nine, in the spring; I believe it was spring break.  KT, Sam (the other ginger), KT’s little sister and I had walked to a nearby ice cream shop, and were on our way back to KT’s house on a road surrounded by forests.  Because of the forests, deer are a very common sight and often linger in the trees near the ditch.
One of us then noticed something: a deer leg.  In the ditch with no deer in sight, lay a furry, bloody limb.
Being the squeamish type, I immediately freaked out at the sight of it.  The others did not, not even KT’s little sister who would only have been eight years old at the time. 
So of course, they all thought it was hilarious that I would scream about it.  Which, naturally, led to the following months being filled with KT, Sam, KT’s little sister, and pretty much any and everyone else who found it funny, repeatedly yelling ‘DEER LEG!’ and then mocking my reaction.

POSITIVELY HILARIOUS.

_______<