Forum / General Discussion / lyrics too .!

lyrics too .!

lets paint the town red
no fuck lets paint it blue
pop some beers open for you
im drinking malibu
hey hey
we are all watching you
fly away to malibu
get well soon
please dont go any higher
how are you so burnt when you are barely on fire
barrelling towards me like as if i look like water
caught up cause i want to try to save you
cause i oughta
yeah i gotta so i will cause theres a way
cause i know those go together so there must be a way
to save you, here come with me
take my hand and we can, we can get out of this place
i'll show you more fun than ruckers
pass me my blue paint and brushes
and we'll start on this city
we wont stop for a minute
we wont stop til its prettier than the girls in it
didnt think that this project would be this big is it
almost finished cause its time for dinner
i want salad i like caesar more than cleopatra
wish i was queen like her
cause thatd be cooler than alaska
and i'd be good at it too, my power i wouldnt lose it
and i'd never abuse it
i could be wise i could be earnest
or oscar wilder than deuces
or maybe useless
we would just have to see how it goes
but you'd complain regardless
you think youre so cool that you froze
you think youre smarter than everyone possibly knows
but im used to it now, i dont bat an eye anymore
i know you think you'd do better, you think bats fly and you soar.

why i clicked this topic.the world may never know

I'm going to be frank, your voice isn't suitable for singing or "rapping".
Edit: Your lyrics make no sense.

AmbulanceParty wrote:
I'm going to be frank, your voice isn't suitable for singing or "rapping".
Edit: Your lyrics make no sense.

well they make sense to me. >.O

maybe i'll switch to "singing" instead of "rapping" and that would work out better .

AmbulanceParty wrote:
I'm going to be frank, your voice isn't suitable for singing or "rapping".
Edit: Your lyrics make no sense.

Lyrics dont really have to make sense, look at 90% of popular music lol

that being said, idk kar, when i read lyrics i automatically make them flow like a rapper would in my head, but then when I hear you try to rap them its all wrong, and i have no idea what your saying and its all blurred together lol

  1. slow down
  2. enunciate
  3. better flow

Satros wrote:

AmbulanceParty wrote:
I'm going to be frank, your voice isn't suitable for singing or "rapping".
Edit: Your lyrics make no sense.

Lyrics dont really have to make sense, look at 90% of popular music lol

that being said, idk kar, when i read lyrics i automatically make them flow like a rapper would in my head, but then when I hear you try to rap them its all wrong, and i have no idea what your saying and its all blurred together lol

  1. slow down
  2. enunciate
  3. better flow

Well most music actually does make sense. There's, if not a story, some indication something is happening.
Reading these, I don't know what's going on.
Everyone's watching a guy. But then he's in trouble and the girl's trying to save him?
And "take my hand and we can, we can get out of this place"? They're both in trouble?
And I don't know what "i know you think you'd do better, you think bats fly and you soar." even means lol.
I just got completely lost.

Kar: I guess just stick with one, solid subject that's a little broad so you can talk/rap more about it and use more of those funky phrases or whatever.

Edit: I understand you're trying to use humorous comparing and rhyming in parts, but you seem to be too worried about that. Focus more on the organization of the whole story then do the comparing like Caesar or whatever you were talking about.

Edit: There's not a primary focus and you don't go into enough detail of what's going on. Some of it may make sense to you like you have something laid out, but you don't go into enough detail and I don't see what this song is supposed to mean.

well first, these are actually pretty useful comments sat and ambalamps so thank you.

um, its probably true that lyrics make more sense to me cause like.. i wrote them <.< no the girl isnt in trouble shes trying to help him by getting them both out.  and soaring is better than flying. and he tihnks hes better than everyone. and everything. =p

also,
"hey hey
we are all watching you
fly away to malibu
get well soon
please dont go any higher
how are you so burnt when you are barely on fire"

is part of the song called Malibu (that i looove ) that i decided to reference , once mentioning the drink malibu .. but i guess if you havent heard that song that wouldnt make any sense . =P

satros : you know what would be a good idea ! i'll write some lyrics, but before i post me trying to rap them, YOU should rap them so you can show me how you think they should sound :P like how thye sound in your head . then i can compare that to how i think they should sound/how they sounded in my head and how i was planning on rapping them. :D would you do that for me??

Kar wrote:
well first, these are actually pretty useful comments sat and ambalamps so thank you.

um, its probably true that lyrics make more sense to me cause like.. i wrote them <.< no the girl isnt in trouble shes trying to help him by getting them both out.  and soaring is better than flying. and he tihnks hes better than everyone. and everything. =p

also,
"hey hey
we are all watching you
fly away to malibu
get well soon
please dont go any higher
how are you so burnt when you are barely on fire"

is part of the song called Malibu (that i looove ) that i decided to reference , once mentioning the drink malibu .. but i guess if you havent heard that song that wouldnt make any sense . =P

satros : you know what would be a good idea ! i'll write some lyrics, but before i post me trying to rap them, YOU should rap them so you can show me how you think they should sound :P like how thye sound in your head . then i can compare that to how i think they should sound/how they sounded in my head and how i was planning on rapping them. :D would you do that for me??

:plsgo:

PLEASE? !! it would be reallyyy helpful. !! =D  i could write it about whatever you wanted !! (within reason. =p)

(would anybody else like to do this little exercise too? could be fun!)

How to write lyrics.

TheFinisher wrote:
How to write lyrics.

brr a bit cOLD around these parts

hipster

ice cold nigga

Kar getting owned by 14 year old girl:

lmao aw  just wait. ONE DAY i'll be as good as her . <.<

i like tihs though its really good

Kar wrote:
lmao aw  just wait. ONE DAY i'll be as good as her . <.<

:plsgo: