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IF I WERE A COWGIRL... :]

Kar wrote:

:plsgo:

The fuck is this shit? Are you even saying words?

lmao, yes, im rapping!

I give up.

fffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuu- what is this I don't even :rage:

o___O LOL whatt !! is it really that bad?! i was pretty proud of it o.O i wrote it last night, i was high and thinking about cowboys =) i actually wrote like two other verses but then i decided i didnt like them. but i DID like these ones.

yknow everytime i write another song, im like, THIS is the best one ive written so far, im super excited about this! lmao but you guys always have the same reactions..

srsly though i liked tihs one <.<

EDIT: THIS ONE EVEN HAS RELEVANT MUSIC. LISTEN. !!

I pressed pause and turned off my computer at "I'm the baddest bitch in the W-"

you turned off your computer? why?! that doesnt even make sense >.< youre reaction is completely irrational. maybe your opinion is too! it all goes hand in hand i mean, if your reaction is bogus, (lawll), then like, it takes away credit from the entire stiuation. if i think youre reaction is irrational and silly, like i do, then it would make sense that your entire cause its all connected. your opinion would be linked to your reaction. THUS . ..

Kar wrote:
you turned off your computer? why?! that doesnt even make sense >.< youre reaction is completely irrational. maybe your opinion is too! it all goes hand in hand i mean, if your reaction is bogus, (lawll), then like, it takes away credit from the entire stiuation. if i think youre reaction is irrational and silly, like i do, then it would make sense that your entire cause its all connected. your opinion would be linked to your reaction. THUS . ..

What the fuck are you saying

What the fuck just happened.

Like, between 4 and 14 seconds, I can't understand a fucking thing you're saying. Like, I'm 99.999% sure they aren't even words.

The most least constructive argument I have ever read.

Anyways, Kar, we can only give you constructive criticism so many times before we just give up as you continue to ignore what we say and make worse music. And then subsequently :rage:

ambalamps: idk i was high and i thought i had a really good thought and would explain it. IN RETROSPECT, its not very eloquent =P

lmao. finisher: 4-14:
"before me, you know, it was just called the west
and you can call me sheriff, got the badge on my vest
and if you disrespect me ima put you to rest
i got my hand on one hip, got my gun on the other
i got the quickest draw here so you dont need to bother
and all the banks round here, yeah they all know my face
they wait in fear for the day i step foot into their place."

satros: i didnt ignore what you said! i put MUSIC in this one, it fits it and everything, its WESTERN MUSIC and it fits very nicely. wasnt that your advice?!! that was it, you guys seem to get mad when i dont put in music. (and i think they keep getting better and better >.<)  so srsly whats wrong with this one? other than maybe not being able to understand what im saying some of the time o.o

Kar wrote:
ambalamps: idk i was high and i thought i had a really good thought and would explain it. IN RETROSPECT, its not very eloquent =P

lmao. finisher: 4-14:
"before me, you know, it was just called the west
and you can call me sheriff, got the badge on my vest
and if you disrespect me ima put you to rest
i got my hand on one hip, got my gun on the other
i got the quickest draw here so you dont need to bother
and all the banks round here, yeah they all know my face
they wait in fear for the day i step foot into their place."

satros: i didnt ignore what you said! i put MUSIC in this one, it fits it and everything, its WESTERN MUSIC and it fits very nicely. wasnt that your advice?!! that was it, you guys seem to get mad when i dont put in music. (and i think they keep getting better and better >.<)  so srsly whats wrong with this one? other than maybe not being able to understand what im saying some of the time o.o

See those are actually what I would consider good lyrics (for a rap song anyways), but fitting music to lyrics is more than just a "theme", there is no flow, its just a giant trainwreck of words mashed together, the music doesnt fit at all(besides being of a similar theme), your going at a completely different pace than the music, also you need to enunciate more so we know that your saying, slow down, etc. lol

good lyrics though I guess

I don't even.

oh thats right! i forgot to post the rest of the lyrics. KAY READY?? GO.

im the baddest bitch in the wild wild west
before me, you know, it was just called the west
and you can call me sheriff, got the badge on my vest
and if you disrespect me, ima put you to rest

i got my hand on one hip, got my gun on the other
i got the quickest draw here so you dont need to bother
and all the banks round here, yeah they all know my face
they wait in fear for the day i step foot into their place

im a menace they say, thats why theyre all after me
say i cause too much trouble when im out there in the street
but thats what i do, so what can i say
ima pull out my pistol if i want to okay?

see i run this town, so you can sit down
cause your badge it dont mean anything when i am around
i rode in with my horse and we like it so we're staying
and nothing you can say can change our minds you must be playing
paying, respect to me with threats of prison,
listen, as long as im here ima fix some flaws
all you deputees, outlawed
im the sheriff while im here and i may be crooked but im always sincere

and if you play your cards right you could be on my time
take the west with me, you could help me scheme
come ride with the baddest in the wild wild west
but let me warn you its nonstop wont have a moment to rest
and if you think that your with it then join me on my quest
steal a horse from over there, we'll begin at sunset.

My reaction to this song

AmbulanceParty wrote:
My reaction to this song


:datass:

.< ksenia and katie like it apparently.

Ksenia and Katie are doing the drugs.