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i need to think of like, song titles.

but i dont like coming up with titles SO. anyway.

Okay so my constructive criticism is that in every song, you don't need to follow the beat with your words. Listen to other rap songs. They may rap fast with a fast tempo, but they don't follow the tempo with their rap.
Just..
Yeah.

er.. well that would just be a coincidence if it did cause i still havent really, yknow.. gotten the hang of the whole, rapping at the same time as the beat is playing

so i did the usual like, write the song, and sing it, and then i looked through a few beats i had made like, last week, and picked that one cause i liked it the best. =S then i just edited it in and whatnot etc.

Kar wrote:
er.. well that would just be a coincidence if it did cause i still havent really, yknow.. gotten the hang of the whole, rapping at the same time as the beat is playing

so i did the usual like, write the song, and sing it, and then i looked through a few beats i had made like, last week, and picked that one cause i liked it the best. =S then i just edited it in and whatnot etc.

You're doing it wrong.
You pick a beat first so the song can actually match.

AmbulanceParty wrote:

Kar wrote:
er.. well that would just be a coincidence if it did cause i still havent really, yknow.. gotten the hang of the whole, rapping at the same time as the beat is playing

so i did the usual like, write the song, and sing it, and then i looked through a few beats i had made like, last week, and picked that one cause i liked it the best. =S then i just edited it in and whatnot etc.

You're doing it wrong.
You pick a beat first so the song can actually match.

Not in JK 420 AM CANADA

AmbulanceParty wrote:

Kar wrote:
er.. well that would just be a coincidence if it did cause i still havent really, yknow.. gotten the hang of the whole, rapping at the same time as the beat is playing

so i did the usual like, write the song, and sing it, and then i looked through a few beats i had made like, last week, and picked that one cause i liked it the best. =S then i just edited it in and whatnot etc.

You're doing it wrong.
You pick a beat first so the song can actually match.

but clearly it DOES match seeing as how you thought i was singing to the beat, your first comment. =P

The wrote:

AmbulanceParty wrote:

Kar wrote:
er.. well that would just be a coincidence if it did cause i still havent really, yknow.. gotten the hang of the whole, rapping at the same time as the beat is playing

so i did the usual like, write the song, and sing it, and then i looked through a few beats i had made like, last week, and picked that one cause i liked it the best. =S then i just edited it in and whatnot etc.

You're doing it wrong.
You pick a beat first so the song can actually match.

Not in JK 420 AM CANADA

what?

Kar wrote:

AmbulanceParty wrote:

Kar wrote:
er.. well that would just be a coincidence if it did cause i still havent really, yknow.. gotten the hang of the whole, rapping at the same time as the beat is playing

so i did the usual like, write the song, and sing it, and then i looked through a few beats i had made like, last week, and picked that one cause i liked it the best. =S then i just edited it in and whatnot etc.

You're doing it wrong.
You pick a beat first so the song can actually match.

but clearly it DOES match seeing as how you thought i was singing to the beat, your first comment. =P

AmbulanceParty wrote:
Okay so my constructive criticism is that in every song, you don't need to follow the beat with your words. Listen to other rap songs. They may rap fast with a fast tempo, but they don't follow the tempo with their rap.
Just..
Yeah.

It needs to match as in it needs to sound like music.
I phrased it wrong earlier.
You need to keep the same beat as the tempo, etc., but you're trying to sing with the instruments.
And the song comes out bad if you sing some random tempo and find the best sound beat (instruments) to match it because you weren't intending to follow the sound beat you found (later after) and so basically it's two different songs forcibly thrown together.

i guess that kinda makes sense. o.O

OHHHH but MIKE ( <3 !!!!!!) said he could help me with my dream career as a rapper lmao. XD he was like 'yeah i could get you started, help you make some beats and record some stuff in a studio' and all this i was like whattttt thats crazy. o.O :D

Kar wrote:
i guess that kinda makes sense. o.O

OHHHH but MIKE ( <3 !!!!!!) said he could help me with my dream career as a rapper lmao. XD he was like 'yeah i could get you started, help you make some beats and record some stuff in a studio' and all this i was like whattttt thats crazy. o.O :D

inb4hehearsyour"rapping"andlulzatyou

LOL awwh. thats a LITTLE bit what im worried about. BUT MAYBE he can like, teach me how to rap better? =o i mean he can rap. ^^ hes good at it ahaha, maybe he can help me improve. =P

yeah well, show him your lyrics first, then fail at rapping, that way you dont look like a complete fail :P

lmaooo.. that is actually pretty good advice i will do that <.<