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another rap :D

the quality isnt great.. and it kinda cuts off really abruptly at the end but i couldnt fix that =S and yesss you will probably  :damnit: at the topic . but other than that .=P

lyrics !:

got my visine in my pocket, put it in my eyes
looking up into the sky, feeling flyer than the birds
higher up im rising
wireless like verizon, stringless and chainless
i feel free
not for buying, bribing, bargaining or heckling
its boggling, choosing bottles over this
green is the way to go and if you disagree,then its fine more weed for me
and for those who wanna feel higher than the clouds
pow, pow, let it hit you as you take a hit and pass it on to me
add some t.h.c. to my pipe from the bottom of the grinder you can add it to the bowl
and we'll smoke it like we're setting off a smoke signal

Lyrics are making more sense lol.
A lot of metaphors though. But I'm not sure if that's bad or good.

well.. i listen to a lot of rap.. and they seem to use a lot of metaphors too lol . so ive kinda been trying to keep putting some in..

Kar wrote:
well.. i listen to a lot of rap.. and they seem to use a lot of metaphors too lol . so ive kinda been trying to keep putting some in..

It's just you might be using too many.
Idk good progress though

AmbulanceParty wrote:

Kar wrote:
well.. i listen to a lot of rap.. and they seem to use a lot of metaphors too lol . so ive kinda been trying to keep putting some in..

It's just you might be using too many.
Idk good progress though

idk brah, it seems pretty damn clear to me that this rap is about shootin up them pot needles witch yo boyz

thus TheFinisher rates this song -Infinity Out of Infinity

Satros wrote:

AmbulanceParty wrote:

Kar wrote:
well.. i listen to a lot of rap.. and they seem to use a lot of metaphors too lol . so ive kinda been trying to keep putting some in..

It's just you might be using too many.
Idk good progress though

idk brah, it seems pretty damn clear to me that this rap is about shootin up them pot needles witch yo boyz

thus TheFinisher rates this song -Infinity Out of Infinity

Read it again. I think I read another song and it had the metaphors. This one's not as intense :lolface:
Getting better.
Sat you should make a thread to put all these songs in instead of all these individual threads  :rage:

or just combine all of kars songs at the sametime played all at once

idk the image makes no sense anyway keep it up (=

lol thanks guys =]

and ya maybe i should have my own thread..

make a thread in creations official kars music thread

post vids and lyrics when u make them

okay =D